FILM OPENING: FIRST DRAFT CHANGES

We have made alot of changes due to our feedback. For example one thing we were pulled up on was our title 'Stockholm'. So we decided to take an idea that we had previously seen during the opening titles of the film Pulp Fiction where we see the dictionary definition of the work 'Pulp'.

We made our own definition so that the audience will know what the title is about and understand the storyline much better. This is a screen shot of our definition which is made to look like a real dictionary definition. this makes it look much more formal.

 

Also at 00:52 seconds til about 00:58 seconds in the first draft, we had a light continuity error as you could see it in this shot, but not in others and so in order to over come this we had to crop it out of the shot, which made tis shot now become a lot more zoomed in and slightly blurry, however it didn't look too bad and it was better then getting marked down for the light error.

We also re-dubbed the audio by doing what I prevoulsy mentioned in other posts which was to have James speaking in a posher tone of voice to make the news report seem more realistic. We managed to make this work really well and sync the pieces together well so that the audience couldn't tell the movie and audio were two seperate recordings.